RAGE POURS OUT IN PAGES.
FOOLS RAVAGING WORKS OF SAGES.
SHORT MEN WITH TUNNEL VISION,
TALK OF PERSPECTIVE AND COHESION.
ABUSING HIS PRIVILEGED POINT OF VIEW,
HE TRASHES ME IN HIS REVIEW.
WHAT DOES HE KNOW AND WHAT DO I CARE!
BUT TO REVIEW MY WORK HE DARED!
28-07-2004
fIRST rEWORK rEQUEST!
2 comments:
Good One.Keep the oupourings of your cerebrum alive.
When the rage boils ur blood
in ur brain creating a gushing flood
makes u clench ur fist
to go for a perfect hit
but hell u cant run
coz hittin ur boss aint ne fun
so nxt time u get the rage
count 10 n turn the page
rusty old poet... n keyboard hinders creativity man
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