Friday, June 15, 2012

The Kick.........


alas! the kick.....
all the seconds that took him to splash in 
he looked like a tadpole, curled into a mirror c shape
the impulse of the kick on his belly, making him spit out water...
his vision blurred, that of his kicker..
and the astounded onlookers...

from the moment he was lifted into air..
by the impulse of the kick, 
until his hits the water thats below...
this is all the time that is there for the universe to create something...
to alter the outcome, to pave a new path,
to open a new dimension...
or just lay back and see how the physics unfold....

Jim Carrey would say there are only 3 elements to a kick....
the kicker, the kick and the kickee....


what he perceives as one instant, is so fulfilling and mindbogglingly complex...
because at this instant , although his conscious mind is trying to understand..
the lack of gravity he is experiencing because of the fall...
the excruciating pain because of the kick  ....
and the muted world around him as he hears only his scream..
his subconscious mind is actually toying with several memories and thoughts ...
crunching out infinite equations in his super quantum computer brain ...
adding parallel definitions to his physical fall.... 
and his mental rise or oblivion...

Footnote: if you are wondering whats with the dots (.....) , i found that i can do away with all punctuation in English language and replace them with 2 "dot" and space (not technically a punctuation) 

Footnote 2: I want to rewrite this... But I am too lazy to edit or rephrase!

1 comment:

Zeus said...

Dude...What the F? re-edit until sense is made!