Friday, November 11, 2011

The attack

S1 : The wind gained speed as he ran like a dog on a fiery chase. The ground was dark and firm, there were no obstacles to be seen for miles, or so he thought. It shook him when the wooden barrier hit him in the face. It's dark colour had deceived him. When he emerged from the other side he felt the small pieces flying in the air around him, but he did not stop. The log house was not too far now. His hands slowly felt for his sword.

S2 : She loosened her grip on the rope. While slithering down slowly she sharpened her senses, dulled her memory and felt the heat in her palms. Her sword did not feel heavy now. The log house was in sight even though the air was foggy. She felt the ground and saw the three guards at the same time. They were motionless but she could feel their alertness.

S3 : He saw the house, the guards and her in that order. The guards spotted him before they had a chance to see her. She ran up the now unguarded staircase. The dust under her footsteps didn't fly up nor the the vibrations leave the planks as she hit them.



3 comments:

neo said...

Anxiously waiting for S4...

An apt opening fight sequence , set beneath a tree house made of bamboo in nilambur forests

Zeus said...

I am not getting the notifications on the actual posting of the blog now. Only on comments. @Ram - is this draft from your NaNoWriMo? Vishidhamayi charchikkaam....

ram said...

I am also waiting for S4 :). And not related to NaNoWriMo, but the guilt of not writing for that made me post this draft :)